The 60 Minute Copy Improvement Makeover
Many people who write ads for the web make tiny little mistakes in word choice that KILL their appeal. One wrong word is all it takes.
Tom Hoobyar created a course called Word Magic and it comes with a “cheat sheet” called The Sales Killers: Seven Words that will Murder Your Ads.
You can run through your sales letter using this 1-page cheat sheet and in ONE HOUR increase your sales.
Tom guarantees that you will literally make money just by hitting the DELETE BUTTON. In 60 minutes your website becomes more profitable or your money back. Buy the $99 “express” version of his course, spend the 60 minutes, get your investment back immediately.
If you go through the Cheat Sheet and you don’t get results, email Tom with documentation of what you did & the measured results, and he’ll refund ya. Last summer he sold about 90 of these to a bunch of my customers and if I’m not mistaken he had only 3 refunds. People are pretty happy with Tom’s simple 1-hour spiff-up.
If you want both his full course and a critique of your copy, opt for the $399 version instead. Again, it’s quick ROI.
The stock market is a little shaky right now, but if you have any kind of real business on the Internet, this is a sound investment. Get the goods here:
http://perrymarshall.com/magic/
Perry Marshall
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Entrepreneur Magazine says: "Perry Marshall is the #1 author and world's most-quoted consultant on Google Advertising. He has helped over 100,000 advertisers save literally billions of dollars in Adwords stupidity tax."
He is referenced across the Internet and by The Washington Post, USA Today, and the Chicago Tribune.
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Hi Perry.
Came across this BRILLIANT bit of remarkable web copywriting for an ebay type listing of a washing machine here in New Zealand. The result has been over 200 000 views of the listing, an interview on TV for the guy, and a huge new following on a newly created Facebook page!
Just goes to show what you always said. Tell a good story!!!!
I wrote a blog post about it…. see the link as the URL.
And check out the actual listing at – http://www.trademe.co.nz/Home-living/Laundry/Washing-machines/Top-loader-6kg-under/auction-223309871.htm